Reviews for I Hate Him And You Will Too

Reviews For: I Hate Him And You Will Too

Shannah 2006-06-20 ch 1,	m, you have weak characters, and not enough information for the reader to really care or sypathise with Katie. But you have a great Idea. Maybe if you made it into a sieres of blogs, starting with some where Katie causualy mentions this new internet friend, then where she talks about him a lot, and then eventually there one where she discovers she loves him, then the one where she had her heart broken. Just a suggestion...if you don't use it I might...because really you have the rough draft of a great idea.
Kai 2006-04-25 ch 1,	Expecting reviews, eh? here's mine: well i hardly read stuff but today i am suspended from skool and i was bored so i signed on MSN and as always didnt see u on xD... well i decided to check your fanfics and fictions and came across this particular one. The truth is i dont even know what to review so i'll just say what i always do, even though it seems odd... i beter not say anything at all now for the sake of being safe lol, hopefully i'll see u later, i am on Yahoo as pinkwhutitdo and i hope to ttyl
NoticeMe-or-Not 2006-03-18 ch 1,	i like it. ^_^
Heart of the RubyFire 2006-03-18 ch 1,	Youch! This has got to hurt! Has this happened to you or someone you know? I've felt like this before, but it has not exactly happened to me. This guy has been cheating on a friend of mine. When she found out, she said that she loved and hated him at the same time. Now she just hates him; I do, too. She said that she feels bad for whoever dates him because they have no clue just what they are getting into. Well, that's the end of my story. I feel sorry for anyone who has ever felt this way or is feeling this way; it's terrible! By the way, does one shot mean just one chapter? Heart of the RubyFire

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