I like it!! I really do! It sounds like a very interesting story, and I can't wait to hear more from the 2 new princes and what their counrty is like!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I think this ranks one of my top 10, and I have over 250 on my alert list!!
Lee

this is really good! plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon!

I suppose Denton is Rakkaus?

Continue? You write well, and your characters are fascinating.

Wow. . . . Denton's really repressed. I think I'm in love!

i hope this story will be continued.
its really good, i want to know what happens at the very end where the prologue ends.

oh, update soon! i really love this story...keep writing!

I love how the story moves...but I was quiet confuse at first...but I wish you continue this please..(^_^)

Looking impatiently forward to updates. Great beginning, good plot line with the whole intolerance to magic. Please continue.

This is a really cool story!

I just can't understand why you don't have more reviews for this; I myself am 'very' intrigued. How you've put everything together is quite refreshing, and I've been looking for a story like this. I hope you don't get bored of it early or become discouraged by the lack of attention; I've seen that far too often. I promise to respond to every chapter, should you keep it up, that is... here's to chapter two! Oh and, near the end of chapter one; one of the twins, Toivo I believe, calls Denton "dear Dalton" after he mentions his lord brother. A small misstep that's fine, just wanted to give you a heads up.AcadiaLynn^~

Very good. I love the emotions and the characters are very well portrayed. I hope you update soon.

wow! i love this story. its so original. actually all your stories are original! horray for you! its so hard to find originality nowadays...ja ne

I really like your story and I hope you'll continue writing new chapters...anyway the characters are very interesting, and their personalities are really well-depicted. I'm impatiently waiting for more!