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| eurtreve 2008-09-22 ch 2,  | abuseContinue? You write well, and your characters are fascinating. |
| Curb Crasher 2007-12-13 ch 2, | abuseWow. . . . Denton's really repressed. I think I'm in love! |
| neongoldtooth 2007-03-15 ch 2, | abusei hope this story will be continued. its really good, i want to know what happens at the very end where the prologue ends. |
| Hell's first Icicle 2006-08-18 ch 2, | abuseoh, update soon! i really love this story...keep writing! |
| Kokoro no Wasuremono 2006-05-26 ch 2, | abuseI love how the story moves...but I was quiet confuse at first...but I wish you continue this please..(^_^) |
| Marie 2006-03-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseLooking impatiently forward to updates. Great beginning, good plot line with the whole intolerance to magic. Please continue. |
| Esquirella 2006-03-24 ch 2, | abuseThis is a really cool story! |
| AcadiaLynn 2006-03-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseI just can't understand why you don't have more reviews for this; I myself am 'very' intrigued. How you've put everything together is quite refreshing, and I've been looking for a story like this. I hope you don't get bored of it early or become discouraged by the lack of attention; I've seen that far too often. I promise to respond to every chapter, should you keep it up, that is... here's to chapter two! Oh and, near the end of chapter one; one of the twins, Toivo I believe, calls Denton "dear Dalton" after he mentions his lord brother. A small misstep that's fine, just wanted to give you a heads up.AcadiaLynn^~ |
| Elenea Galad 2006-03-23 ch 2, | abuseVery good. I love the emotions and the characters are very well portrayed. I hope you update soon. |
| Kyandoru 2006-03-23 ch 2, | abusewow! i love this story. its so original. actually all your stories are original! horray for you! its so hard to find originality nowadays...ja ne |
| pivoine 2006-03-23 ch 2, | abuseI really like your story and I hope you'll continue writing new chapters...anyway the characters are very interesting, and their personalities are really well-depicted. I'm impatiently waiting for more! |