 pyraverne 2006-06-19 . chapter 1Augh, (whacks self oer head with frying pan) I should have read this 'un earlier, its AWESOME. The hope, the impending joy, the anticipation... I can't take it anymore. I DEDICATE MYSELF TO THIS POEM! (Conscience: plese excuse her... please?) HAHAHA please come back for some awesome stories to kick off the summer! ~Pyra |
 Maranwe Telrunya 2006-04-06 . chapter 1How touching. And how much I can relate to it! Keep up the good work! |
 maxnotevoltage 2006-03-31 . chapter 1The reminiscence in this poem is awesome. It's like a ringing in the ears - eerie, in a surreal way...
There is a definite sense of reassurance present, here. I admire your strength! You will see her in heaven, one day.:-)
And, till then, may God bless you, always! -- J.max |
 prettyinpinkgal 2006-03-20 . chapter 1Oh my gosh. It's so great. It really comes from the heart. I have to go now, but it's truly amazing. God bless you! |
 Irony Illuminator 2006-03-18 . chapter 1I'm so sorry about your friend... The knowledge that you're going to see her again one day in Heaven really comes through in this poem... It's such a comfort to know that. Good job |
 writingonpaperx 2006-03-18 . chapter 1I really love this, great job. Thanks for the kind remarks on my essay :) |