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pyraverne 2006-06-19 . chapter 1
AW (sniffs) such wonderful sibling love! I wish I did that more often for my sis! WAH! (Conscience: don't cry Pyra! It's just a poem-) ((Me cuts off Conscience) IT'S NEVER JUST A POEM! WHAT A STUPID THING TO SAY!)(Don't mind my stupid conscience please. SIGH some just don't get it... don't you wish they all did?) See you later! ~Pyra
Maranwe Telrunya 2006-04-06 . chapter 1
I'm having feelings similar to this for a friend of mine- it's comforting to know that God is there, listening, loving, and guiding us. Oh, by the way it's "non-denominational" not "Undenominational". Ugh, big word, either way. =^D ~Maranwe
Needa S 2006-03-21 . chapter 1
Very touching. I know what you mean. I have a brother that has gone astray as well. Prayer is their only key to salvation. God Bless ya. Thank you for the kind reviews.
maxnotevoltage 2006-03-20 . chapter 1
I love your poetry so much. You have a way with words that seems to come so naturally, and your prayers to God are so sincere!

"Lead him back/ To Your salvation,/ Show him the grave,/ From which you have risen."

^ That's such an awesome picture - I don't know the person you're praying for, but I know that God will touch him somehow. We can't change another person's heart, but God can. Those lines are great, because they show how God reveals Himself to people in His own time.

Awesome poem, and thanks so much for all your reviews!

God bless, always:-) -- J.max
Irony Illuminator 2006-03-18 . chapter 1
Your prayer is so real... You really wrote it to sound very sincere. I like it a lot... It captures the fact that no matter what we've done, we can always come back to Jesus. As a side note, thank you so much for all the reviews you've sent me! They made my day!
Princess-anna57 2006-03-18 . chapter 1
This poem is so touching! *wipes a tear away*, I really hope all goes well. A well written poem! Keep writing!

Thanks for your lovely reviews! ^_^

~Anna~ ^_^
sides-of-magic 2006-03-18 . chapter 1
I have to say I love prayers. Your si no exeption.
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