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| Damaged 2006-05-04 ch 1,   | Absolutely breath-taking poem!! I found this so easy to relate to and felt the intense emotions of insecurity, angst, and independency! Beautiful job! This poem is so smooth and so easy to understand, almost every reader will be able to console with this -- a pure example of true talent in the creative arts! I've also written a piece that is similar to this, but it's just called "Masquerade" and isn't nearly as first-point-of-view, rather it's a generality. I'd love your input on mine, if you ever find the time to read it. Wonderful job, again! I'll have to read more of your poetry! Keep up the brilliant writing! ~Damaged~ |
| MagicalThinking 2006-03-18 ch 1, | Interesting, its so gorgeous-really! Wonderful writing! ^_~ |