 Shrian 2007-04-11 . chapter 3-loves all your stories-
update this one too! ;)
hehe |
 tornangelwings 2007-02-17 . chapter 3i love it, you really should continu. it's amazing, i love the names, they are so unique. i love kai's name along with leilani's keep it up |
 Hanban 2006-12-04 . chapter 3 Wah...update ka naman dito! Nakaka-miss itong basahin kaya binasa ko 'to ulit...Hahaha! Maganda kasi simula nito eh! Sorry din kung hindi ako naka-review nung pinost mo yung first chappie...hehehe!
Hanban |
 October Darling 2006-11-10 . chapter 3A bit cliche, but not unwanted! So many characters, but they're all interesting. I really want to know what will happen to Aofie and Kai!! So please, update! |
 Lovediamond15 2006-06-23 . chapter 3wow, this is a good story, i like the plot, carry on and please update soon! lol, i like Kai! u have some really good characters in this |
 mookyjoo 2006-05-20 . chapter 3*squeal*another quality story!heehehehehehecan't wait for it to be updatedand your others! |
 Hanban 2006-04-12 . chapter 3Another stereotypical-popular-girl-** huh? I like it!
And judging from Kai's reactions, I was almost touched when he said 'he would never choose anyone from Leilani'.
And lol, the balcony's gonna get a big role here? Well done, missy! And also, I thought of Romeo and Juliet except the part where they exchange mushy stuff! (I like poems, but theirs was just a bit too romantic)
So anyways, hope you'll give us a new chapter here! And please update soon on The Fine Line B/w Hate and Love! I really loved it! And also The Piper and the Doll! Ariel's just so hawt! Oh, did I get the name right? I almost forgotten about it! Hehe! Sorry!
Hannah |
 Hanban 2006-04-12 . chapter 2Oh darn, I forgot most of the details I wanted to give in this chappy! I guess I was too hooked of what happened to her.
And I did kinda laughed at the part when she said that if she wanted her family to be aware of her, she'd have to lose blood but then would be dead in less a year.
I know that it was supposed to be kinda sarcastic and cynic and humurous too but I guess I was being sadistic at this time when I read that part.
And also, while rereading this chappy, I must say that I really don't want to experince of what an unfortunate day she had.
And one last thing: Aoife has glasses huh? At first read I thought that Kai lent his sunglasses to her so I supposed to ask if why he would want her to wear his sunglasses but as I've reviewed it, I realized that it was her eyeglasses that he handed her. Ha ha!
Even though I already have four eyes (LOL), I still almost didn't catch my mistake! Haha! Lame. So hope you do more!
Hannah |
 Hanban 2006-04-12 . chapter 1NO FREAKING WAY!
I STUDY AT AN ALL-GIRLS SCHOOL NAMED ST. SCHOLASTICA'S ACADEMY (SSA)!
Very coincidental huh?!!?
Okay...I'm getting way too excited here.
I'll give longer reviews in your later chapters!! Ta-ta for now!
Hannah |
 Raven of Ice 2006-04-07 . chapter 3This is EXCELLENT. I love it. I can't wait to see how you're gonna use the balconies. Keep it comin! |
 luz de luna 2006-04-07 . chapter 3 I realy like your story. Keep going and update soon!! |
 elena-maria 2006-04-06 . chapter 3 oh its dedicated to me!! yay!!okie on with the story...
kai is suddenly so different! u took me by surpirse there! and u added a bit of mystery in aoife's part, me likey. im looking forward to the twins goin to their new school!
see you on retreat! |
 Alice 2006-04-06 . chapter 3 Lol.. This chapter was cute in a bit of a sad way because they were talking about her and stuff. I like the way it's in different perspectives.. well not really but focussing on one person at a time if you understand me lol. Anyway Great story! I will love every chapter.. Oh yeh if you get a review from aneedegorarose or sometihhng thats me cs sometimes I sign it and sometimes I don't and its habit to just write alice :D |
 Alice 2006-04-06 . chapter 2 lmao! I would hate to have my balcony face some other persons room.. I would probably squeak and dive into my room and never draw my curtains ever.. Great chapter- Poor Girl, That was one hell of a bad morning! |
 ladyjayliz 2006-04-06 . chapter 2I love your story. I hope to read more soon. |