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| LovelyxXxDreams 2007-12-07 ch 55,   | Ive read your whole story from the first fictional line all the way to the authors notes at the bottom. I loved this story so much. When i went to the the last authors note where you said you were rewriting the story i felt tears come to my eyes. Which was really weird because the rewrite is what caught my attention first. But the original should always come first in my mind, so i read this one. Then when i finally got to the a/n and read about the changes you were making my eyes started to burn. I don't know why, but i get emotionally attached to stories i read. i know that sounds super insane but its true. When the seventh harry potter book came out i read it nonstop! i didnt eat or go to the bathroom. I got really pissed when people asked me to do stuff and cranky when my dog started to bark at the birds. I have absolutely no idea why i just said the things i said but i think i felt like i had to. i can't believe im a highschool sophmore and i still act like over emotional baby...ignore me. great work! BYE! |
| under the bed 2007-08-30 ch 28, | "I'm not tired! I'll go run a mile now! No, make that two!" LOL |
| under the bed 2007-08-29 ch 21, | what on earth is a klondike bar? lol I can't believe they're up to making out for one :) Is it chocolate? I wanna a be a S.C.A.K. All I've got is T.A.D.P (the awesome drama people) |
| Caitiebee 2007-08-07 ch 16, | I've heard of a drawing called Mr. Linden's Library before. It was drawn by Harris Burdick... and you can find it in a book called The Harris Burdick Mysteries I think.. well.. check it out if you want.. this story and the edited version rocks.. buut I'm more partial to the edited because Kyle seemes to stick more to his character. well yeahh.. good job! |
| You Really Think Im Listeni... 2007-08-02 ch 56, | I love this! But... suddenly i feel sick that it's over... It's hard to explain, but basically i feel horrible after a story i love is over... Now i feel all bad... T.T I blame you. -poke- |
| You Really Think Im Listeni... 2007-08-02 ch 53, | How did kyle find a news place that had a window behind it? |
| silentscream4luv 2007-06-28 ch 56, | o i've loved it... i cant wait to read the SQ... oh my how i loved it..lol.. i really like kyle.. i hope that they stay together.. that'd be PERFECT |
| I'm the Evil Twin 2007-06-10 ch 57, | i would like you to post the rewrite too so we can read both. that is if you want to... |
| fantasyrocker561 2007-06-10 ch 57, | id love to read ur rewrite lily!this story is really good i wuldve reread it anyway lol |
| Dark-Angel29 2007-06-10 ch 57, | i would love to read a rewrite of boarding house! i love boarding house! |
| AbbeyEileen 2007-06-10 ch 57, | Post it as a rewrite but as a separate story. Just mention in the summary that it's rewritten. That way, people can see the way it was originally and how it's been improved upon. It can make it a lot easier to understand. |
| Venus Smurf1 2007-06-10 ch 57, | Well, if you'd just done some editing, I'd say change this story. If you've really changed the characters--especially if you've made Claire more bitter--I'd say post it as a separate story. I, for one, will still review everything, but I'd hate for Claire to lose...well, whatever it is that Claire has. New story, please! |
| RomanticGirly101 2007-06-10 ch 57, | I'd love to read your rewritten story! |
| Mean titan 2007-05-31 ch 30, | I'm sorry about your aunt. And... Your boyfriend is dumb. |
| Mean titan 2007-05-30 ch 18, | Squeel! |