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gabriellafaith 2007-01-14 ch 6,	He's got issues. You've got issues. We've all got issues! WOOHOO let's dance! lol Okay, I'm probably sufficiently wierding you out now...and you're thinking who is the freak with the messed up head...and she's trying to say that I'M messed up?!? lol Ah, go ahead, I don't care. Okay, bye-bye! -Megan
gabriellafaith 2007-01-14 ch 5,	Wow. Crepy.
gabriellafaith 2007-01-14 ch 4,	Hm that's kinda random... I think I'm just gonna go rndomly show up at this other creeps house who's just like me!! PARTY! lol
gabriellafaith 2007-01-14 ch 3,	WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH YOUR BRAIN?!?!?!?!?! lol I mean that in the best way possible... XD lol Where did you get this idea? I mean seriously...just sitting there hm...i think I'm gonna write a story about some creepy little dude that grows from a tree and then goes around eating all the little buttmunches I mean REALLY...you've GOT to be insane... I wanna meet you! ^.^ lol
gabriellafaith 2007-01-14 ch 2,	Is it wierd that I almost feel sorry for him? Um okay... moving on. yes, I'm crazy :D
gabriellafaith 2007-01-14 ch 1,	um. What the heck lol. He just gobbles him up? Just like that? WHAT. THE. HECK. gobble gobble lol hey! that sounds like a turkey! ROFL wOw...I'm in a really random mood... O.o Okay, bye-bye XD
Qzie 2006-09-16 ch 6,	kay... the descriptions are good, but i'm a little lost. are we missing something here?
Gaki Toki 2006-09-12 ch 6,	Okay...there's a little shimmer of a plot but come on, if you're going to write a story write more! And learn how to show us and not tell us. Use some similes, some metaphors. Hey, I have an insane killer and you have a non-sexual Jeff Dahmer...there is a difference. Anyways, you really have some writing issues and I'm flattered you like my reviews but I'm smashing your story, how can you like that? I just don't like the voice in your writing, it's not like you could write an entire book this way...try to read some books like this to see how the author writes and try to copy the style. It's hard and I hate doing it but eventually you settle into your own style...sometimes it's good, sometimes it sucks...and sometimes it's just creepy. Try reading my rewrites of Angel of the Crimson Halo or Broken Wings That Never Mend...they have my style that I've picked up from reading dozens of Stephen King novels...it's not just like him but it's got just a hint of his voice as well as other authors (such as Harper Lee, Herman Melville, and John Knowles). ^_^ I read too much. Good luck with this story, I'm sure you'll get better. (Meant as a compliment) ~Gaki
Darket 2006-09-12 ch 6,	Odd story so far... I kinda feel lost. THis is weird. But it's pretty funny.
Gaki Toki 2006-06-04 ch 5,	What is the point of this story? Is there one? I'm so confused as to what the ** POINT is! What is going on here, I want some info or something, I want a plot other than just eating people, I want STUFF.
Qzie 2006-05-26 ch 5,	this is probably one of the weirdest stories i have ever read, and i mean that in the best possible way there is. it's really amusing, but i think you need some more descriptions. that's just my three cents. anyways, nice job!
Qzie 2006-05-26 ch 1,	weird (in the good sense), but very intriguing. has a lot of potential. when october ate the guy, that kinda made me laugh. maybe it's just my weird sense of humor, but... yeah.
GerardYuroshi 2006-05-24 ch 5,	Meh...I wish I could eat people...THAT WOULD BE FUN! lolz Fun chappie...YAY EAT MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ^_^ :huggles: uh...k'bye xGeRBeaR49x
Angelus1322 2006-05-23 ch 5,	Great chapter. I really liked the part where Shark ate the heart.
midnightcircus84 2006-05-06 ch 4,	Can't wait to see the next chapter! Keep writing!

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