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| sarah1491 2006-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseWow. Such emotion and feeling for such a short poem. I love how you used italics to describe the poem and at the end the actual poem is the one un-italicized line. Wonderful job. I really admire it and enjoyed reading it. :) My favorite line would have to be: "She pours her heart into a poem," it just sounds so nice. It makes me think it's personification, although it isn't really. Nice job and great use of vocabulary and description. I can really feel your love for poetry and emotion flow through this poem. Amazing. :) - Sarah |
| multiples of six 2006-07-20 ch 1, | abuseOh. Oh oh oh I know this feeling. Maybe that's only because it really is quite cryptic. But - yeah, I - well, great last line. Awesome poem. Nice job. =) |
| l. fayette 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuselinz is amazing! and the poem is prety good too |
| jcc123 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abusehm... twitchy |
| simplicity1love 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI am in love with this poem . As it may relate to you , it relates to me . Great work ! Continue writing ; you have a talent for portraying things in short terms . |