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| Crazyest-of-Matt's 2006-03-20 ch 1,   | wow, that was really amazing i wish i could write like you do |
| Anani Moose 2006-03-18 ch 1, | Ooh, metaphoritism! Or at least I thought so. (And yes, that is an invented word). The parallels between acting onstage and in real life...interesting! I love the repetitiveness of "he shouldn't have to comfort me". I think everyone feels like that sometimes, that they are a burden if they let someone help them. But eventually you give in and find that it's really better to be helped. I also love "It takes real acting to live a lie, It takes true love to save a life". both of those statements are so true. True acting is living the little deceits in everyday life that skew the picture of who you are, and only true love can see through the deceits and make the picture clear again. Oh, sorry, I think I'm rambling. This really made me think. Amazing poem! |
| DynamicEquilibrium 2006-03-18 ch 1, | This is really more than it seems, because it might not be for a play that you are acting... for me, it's life that I'm afraid of. Great job! |
| Neverlander12 2006-03-18 ch 1, | It's beautiful and lyrical. Very evocative and flowing. Magnificent. Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig |