c'mon ness, you can do it ^^

Hey, here I am submitting a review! So far all I've read is the introduction but I just wanted to say that it's as freaking awesome as it was a few months ago when I read it! I love the way that you worded everything and I love the analogy of hiding behind a mask...I can almost hear it in that echoing narrator voice, it gives me chills! Can't wait to read the other chapters :)
Barbara

That was a nice chapter. I really do feel sorry for Susan.

Anyway~ I can't wait to read more of this! I'm so glad I found the time to take a break! Hahhaa~


Drawings? I would love to see those drawings! ^_^

That was really sad. But a great chapter. Can't wait to read the next one~ Haha!

Oh man! Cliffhanging suspense... ;.; Haha~ This one was nice. Got to know a lil bit more about the kids. ^_^

Love this story!

"Mia had warned me that there might be things living there. Things that were, as she put it “dangerous, unfriendly, deadly, ugly, and smelly.” I didn’t want to encounter something that was any of those things, let alone all of them."

Haha~ That one was a great paragraph. And I liked the ending of this chapter too. ^_^

Hope it gets better and better.

Finally got to read another chapter.

Really nice battle scene ^_^

I gotta say though, I got a little confused when you changed the narration from first person to third person. Interesting thing with them changing into animals too.

o do I get some 0o0

This is for all the pages combined. First of all, add more story, but i am sure you already knew that, right? Second of all, that is one of the best storiesi have ever read, it cought my attion and everything. my only suggestions is to have something bad happen and maby have the demon Ryu apper again, i never thought of that, and it is a new twist of stories like that. Also, for all of those people who don't know what kitsunes are, you might wanna have an authers note. I knew, but that is only thinks to you guys, anime, manga and animanga club. A good desine could be from FMA, when Ed almost transmuts the prisiners into the phlosiphors stone. the degine kind of like the one on the floor (after Ed makes it more charged), and have it somewhat shiny. Those are what I say to your story

sincerally
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I must say that the intro is pretty intriguing. I like the depth you put into it (though referance to Superman kinda makes me wonder how will this turned out to be a fantasy as it seems to take place in our own world).
Can't say anything plotwise, but your way of writting seems nice. I'll be sure to check the rest of the story in a near future.
Good job.

Love it so far. Gotta love hybrid Ryu! Can't wait to see more of him! I wish you would put in killer rabbits or something like that like I was trying to pursuade you to months ago. Can't wait for more to be posted!

pst. Hi I reviwed happy? You already know I like the story blah blah blah. I'm done

nice dramatic introduction

The first part really took me off guard. ^^; And reading it through, found out it was just a game. Now makes me wanna buy a console myself! Haha!

This ended in an interesting cliffhanger. Will read the next chapter when I get the chance!

Wow. That was an interesting introduction!