You've done some really great work here, and I liked the tone of your poem a lot. The only suggestion I would make is that you add more punctuation. Your sentences tend to end on the ends of lines, but when the reader doesn't see a period or a comma, it makes it hard to realize when to pause or when you're ending a thought. But that's the only criticism I have for the poem. I thought the title was effective because it's eye-catching, and my favorite line was this: "I tried to give up being human, but that’s just too hard." Nice job.

Saena

You seem so conversational, I can imagine this being read out loud and people barely realising it was poetry and being carried away gently anyway (or maybe not that gently.) Really great work, keep it up.

Wow, that was really good. I really liked the way you wrote it, it was sad, and almost humorous.. It was really, really good...I can't describe how good it was... but I bet you could, you being so good at using words.. anyway, completely awesome, great job, I'm off tor ead more of your work.