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ConfusedLover9109
2006-11-14
ch 1,
wowzers! you need to turn this "project" into a story a novel, if ya want to say that, this is really good, even for the beginning. i think it would be intresting for little Emlyn to fall in love with wes, of course as a father figure. it would as be quite unique to make her see that she wants him,and of course he wants her, he just dont want to admit it. MUCH MUCH potential.

Confused Lover
Drops of Jewpiter
2006-03-18
ch 1,
OY! this was such a great beginning. I love your writing style and the plot line is actually somewhat original, which is more than i can say for most stories on this sight. awesome job, can't wait till you update!

~dropsofjewpiter~
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