Once again that was so "BOMB"! It was so pwetty and cute. And so true. I loved it! ^^

Niceness! All I would suggest is that you work on rhythm. It's not true for all poetry, but some of the best ones are the ones where you say them and you can almost hear a beat, like a song. See if you can add or take away syllables from lines to give it rhythm. It's a trick, but if you get it, it feels god. Glad to know you're a Christian. I like to check profiles of my reviewers and that thrilled me as I am one too!

Wow, I really liked that! Good Job! :)