Whoa! That was so "BOMB!" it was the best ever! I loved it! And I love, LOVE! So yeah this was just about the neat-Oest poem ever! ^.~

Good! Pretty and poignant ending. Also, was trying to think of books to recommend (the eragon books are quite good, I agree) and was wondering if maybe you might enjoy Raising Dragons by Bryan Davis. I liked it a lot and it's part of a series. Anyway, ta.

Very nice, awesome write.

I must say it;s good, but really not my taste.Keep up the good work. Stodaklop

Beautiful, beautiful writing!Everything feels so clear, cleansed, beautiful, descriptive and simple in this poem. It's elegant, and --unbelievanly true to its word! ...it controls the world

^_~ keep writing!