Thanks for sharing such a personal poem. It was lovley.

Skylar Bane...

100% Love it, thanks anna the best for me.

love this piece. so personal yet a feeling/emotion/experience i think some of us all have felt/seen in our parents. thank you for posting it. so very beautiful.

I really liked this, sometimes it's the personal things that help you write the best. I like how the story behind this resolves in a good way. Well done.

This one is the most powerful I've read of yours so far. Keep up the good work.

This is quite a good poem, and obviously very personal, as you said. Thanks, I quite liked it!

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You send these poems to her? They're all so passionate. Damn someday I hope to get as good as you. :)

Oh my... wow. Thats personal, and just amazing. if you wrote this quite a while ago then you were a very, very good writer back then.

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I love this seriously It's sad how that happens well at least things seem (at the looks of your poem) things are getting better so best wishes!

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This nearly made me cry.

It makes so much sense, I love how you've managed to put things into words so neatly that most people struggle to articulate at all.

It's clearly very personal, and all the better for it.

I wanted to send you a message thanking you for the comment on my poem 'The End', as well. It's the first time I've let people read what I write, and I'm really nervous. Yours was the first comment I got, so thanks.

This really is what poetry is all about. Writing from your heart and saying your feelings. Thank you so much for posting it.

being so personal it's only right that the wording is very straight-forward, and I congratulate you on your bravery for putting such personal material on without a hint of a veil or metaphor to hide it behind! i doubt i could do that. it's extremely moving, well done.

I like how you used "sharp needles/injecting sadness...", I think it's very poetic. And your Australian spelling adds to that personal point, just thought I'd say that. :)

good one.

thats really good...lots of deep feelings...those are always the best poems...and the best poets are the ones that can get into thier feelings...great job keep it up!

Sephira Lysa