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| Time's Journey 2006-03-19 ch 1, | Aw this is such a sweet poem! It really made me smile. It’s lovely to see how a special person can bring so much happiness to you. |
| DCLehnsherr 2006-03-19 ch 1, | Brilliant work ~ Smiles ~ Truly beautiful having love like that sounds amazing. I like the way the lines have been used to seperate the stanzas that's a very good idea. I love the way everything flows and fits into place and the fact that the end is so final and completes the poem. As i said before...brilliant ^_^ |