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Reviews For: The Gift of a Smile

Time's Journey
2006-03-19
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Aw this is such a sweet poem! It really made me smile. It’s lovely to see how a special person can bring so much happiness to you.
DCLehnsherr
2006-03-19
ch 1,
Brilliant work ~ Smiles ~ Truly beautiful having love like that sounds amazing. I like the way the lines have been used to seperate the stanzas that's a very good idea.

I love the way everything flows and fits into place and the fact that the end is so final and completes the poem.

As i said before...brilliant ^_^
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