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| forty-two dreams 2006-03-22 ch 1,   | Delightfully multilayered |
| Tag Holland 2006-03-19 ch 1, | Hey, I liked this. I'm guessing this was at least partly a biography despite not being written in first person?It was well paced I thought, but found the over-use of parentheses tended to break the sentences up too much. |