Defiantly brought a smile to my face when I read this. The only thing I do not like is the "'Twould". It doesn't fit the tone and feeling of the poem.

Other then that, nice work.

Keep writing,

-Seras

this one seems a bit different to me. it's almost as if it rhymes, even if it doesn't. but the poor little box, you owe the poor blighter quite a bit, dontcha?

This has a marvelous flow. It represents the feeling about inanimate objects so well. Good work.

Hehe... computers are way too addicting.