Not fond if this poem .. why not? It is absolutely a work of art.

Most of the lines need very little or no work, the only thing I could remotely crtique is perhaps your form, it is a bit rough around the edges.

keep writing . . .. JY

I actually do like this. Ther eis so much to be seen between the words themselves that aids the understanding of them! That and i just love the 'I could be all you want, if only you ask the right questions' part. So deep and meaningful. Well done ^_^

Have a great day yourself.