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| Bekah Stargazing 2006-04-03 ch 1,   | Ahh, Bekah. Your poems about gayness are always a joy to read. I love that you don't ever fit the stereotype of anything. Fitting the stereotypes is just so overrated... I love this. |
| FURTILL 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Once again, you are an amazing poet... |
| DrowningFlame05 2006-03-20 ch 1, | I like the meaning of this poem. I actually wrote an article about the meaning of the word gay for my school paper. Anyways first half is good, second half isn't as clear. Seems like you lost some focus on it, all in all it sounds o.k. |
| cookiemonster 2006-03-19 ch 1, | i loved this. its so great because its so different! its one thing to make a poem with a deep message, but you also integrated originality and something unique, and controversial. GREAT JOB! Henna |