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| BrainMagMo 2007-09-06 ch 3,   | that was a nice story. it was short and cute. 3rd to last paragraph should start with a (") , otherwise it's perfect. |
| HGiel 2007-07-30 ch 3, | I enjoyed that. You are a good writer. |
| M 2007-07-22 ch 3, | You have to write more! It's a really good story! I'm already hooked! |
| Amerez 2007-07-22 ch 2, | Ok, ignore my last review...I am a total spaz who did not see the words THE END written in bold. Geez. Anyways, it was a sweet story, I would have liked to have had more, but oh well. Again, please excuse my spaziness. |
| Amerez 2007-07-22 ch 3, | yay. I'm always so happy when I find a cool story. I like this. Kevin seems so sweet. I did get a bit confused about the POV, you might want to make clearer distinctions when you chance it. Update soon...please! |
| Me! 2006-07-24 ch 1, | This is really good! Please continue soon, I want to read more! -D.F. |
| Esquirella 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Cool start! |