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| Rafael Freire 2006-03-19 ch 1,   | thats cute! i'd like to hear it so i could know the right rhythm cuz sometimes there wasnt rhyming but it was interesting either way, keep it up! |
| ajay 2006-03-19 ch 1, | i love it that happend too me dont give up dont worry its ganna work hell notice whats infront of him |
| ICaughtFire 2006-03-19 ch 1, | A simple, effective unrequited love song. Oh, how I know this feeling. This is a nice song, and I want to wish you the best of luck with your love...just don't give up. |
| sunday night sky 2006-03-19 ch 1, | i LOVE the bridge. i imagine this as a michelle branch style song... i can hum it in my head... great job! |