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| melukia 2007-03-01 ch 1,   | hey! well, i luv angst! n this is gud angst! angst-saya-saya! nyahaha! this is not corny:) i lyk it, really:) however, i;m not xur if d paper will accept it:) hahaha! *pokes* -achi meme |
| j.u.s.t. .f.o.r. .m.e 2006-03-19 ch 1, | great work! i love the mood and the tone, it makes the poem seem really melodic and sad. my fav. line: Soon enough I'll be alone / To face my darkest fears. keep it up! |
| sunday night sky 2006-03-19 ch 1, | aww this is really sad. very touching. i can relate to the feeling, and i like the rhythm and rhyme. great job! |