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| fairytale failure 2006-09-16 ch 1, | that one's awesome too. and again it sounds like me '-' but I didn't notice the rhyme scheme really until the end. |
| Written 2006-09-16 ch 1, | genuine feeling, but some of the rhyme seems almost forced. it's good though! |
| kristun999 2006-03-19 ch 1, | this is really good. i think we all feel that way sometimes. |