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fairytale failure
2006-09-16
ch 1,
that one's awesome too. and again it sounds like me '-' but I didn't notice the rhyme scheme really until the end.
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2006-09-16
ch 1,
genuine feeling, but some of the rhyme seems almost forced. it's good though!
kristun999
2006-03-19
ch 1,
this is really good. i think we all feel that way sometimes.
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