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| QueenVixta 2006-04-02 ch 1,   | I'm looking at your poetry in a totally different light now that I've re-read your bio - I didn't know English was your second language! That makes everything you write seem even more amazing. I really like this poem, I can relate and it's a very beautiful piece. Well done. V x |
| Princess-anna57 2006-03-29 ch 1, | Great work! Excellent! Write on! ~Anna~ |
| FrostedTeardrop 2006-03-25 ch 1, | The was absolutely amazing. Great poem, I really liked the way you ended it 'Anybody but me'. Brilliant! Never stop writing. |
| FunkyFlower17 2006-03-24 ch 1, | i'd have to go with...the 'like it':-) it was pretty cool how u kept up the flow and i liked the repetition. interesting atmosphere at the beginning. great job, ~mez~ |
| Needa S 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Beautiful, awesome write. |
| Luma 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Oh, this poem...it's just...awesome, incredible. And I can relate, I can recognise myself so much it's almost scary.Well done! |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-21 ch 1, | Full of feeling. Represents so much of emotion. Well done. |
| Ryan Colt 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I liked reading it, though I cant say I relate 100%, I still enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work, I think I'll enjoy reading all your work ^_^ |
| Game-Master-Gal 2006-03-20 ch 1, | I like it alot, its very poetic with a strong meaning and thats what counts. Though it is sad, it is very true in alot of homes, I give it a ten out of ten! Xo's |
| Xena 2006-03-20 ch 1, | meme! 7ayati..ok i missed u ..so i thought i'd get my dose of u through ur poems, and then i noticed u posted a new one.. as usual i loved it..its not what i was expecting and may b thats what i like about it..it wasnt predictable cuz ppl usually associate the phrase "theres no place like home" with happy memories..i hope uve exagerrated the tragic nature of home for writing purposes...lol..I love the repetition and even more i love u..mwah keep writing!! |
| Sunami Silverblade 2006-03-19 ch 1, | Tiptoe around someone... I like that image. ^_^ Nice work, Meme! |
| sunday night sky 2006-03-19 ch 1, | i like this, its very lyrical, almost song like. love the repetition. great job :D |