Very very deep poem. I'm not going to pretend I can analyze and interpret poems, I'm just going to simply say that I enjoyed it and that I can relate this a WHOLE lot. Anyway, that's what poems are all about, for the readers to relate to and I definitely did with this one. I like your poems. Keep up the very good work!

Simply wow! Loved it! My favorite line was "Deathly frozen by an unearthly frost"Words were used superbly!~Dana

Beautiful... it has this romantic era touch to it... I love it... I think you have a mistake in your first line... but that was all... everything else was good!

wow, i dont know how you do it, but keep it up because thats amazing stuff and you should definately keep it up!

Heya lol that is actually really good lol! Well done:P x

i love this! the rhyme is great, not too forced or repetitive. i like the breaks from the four-line stanzas to the two-line stanzas. works well. great job!

very powerful poem. i just hope i never have to feel that way because it feels like u have felt it all. i wouldnt wish that on anyone :(

aww...that was realy sad! ur words speak the truth. love is eternal yet blind. well done!