Great use of language, like a twisty turny ride.

great poem. it has such an interesting structure/rythm to it. i love how it flows but doesn't necissarily rhyme perfectly. sometimes ppl try too hard to make a line rhyme and they end up messing up the poem. awesome job :)

~dropsofjewpiter~

'FaithlessFatelessFallingWeightless' love that bit - flows so well. i like the ambiguity of the ending, very intriguing. great job!