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| Osunale 2006-08-01 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful allusions. I was quite caught by the formatting...I very much like the broadening towards the base. An excellent work. |
| KingdomRain 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuselike the last i thought it was strange but good non the less... i have to say out of all the strange poems to me... i like yours... wonderful really... keep writeing. |
| Holly Rose E 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abusethis speaks, almost harshly, to me in this moment of my life. i've read this a million times over, studying it and idolizing it. but it wasn't until recently that it really hit home. but it stuck in my mind, and i'm just glad i was able to find it again. to print it out. to place it upon my wall. and read it... it gives me strength... needless to say, this is a wonderful poem. i love your works. |
| Katterree Fengari 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abuseHm...interesing...especially the ending- with a colon? Curious style. I like the start. |
| poet tree 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuselast verse - ohmygod the best five lines i have read in such a long time i LOVE it (adds to faves) |
| parody of pain 2006-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abusei love the flow in this piece... i like the 'eve-addicted apple', loved that phrase, thank you for the review i haven't been posting much of my writing now a days, i feel like time is an ominous night sky with a large moon peering on me from its zenith... anywho when i do post i hope you check it out...lovekj |
| in a jar pk 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuseeden and poetry. brilliant. i loved it. |
| Arcane D. 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuseThe formatting is unique, your prose and diction is beautiful as always. Need I say more? Brilliant. - ADD-san |
| heroin zombie 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseBEAUTIFUL AND BRUTAL AND BANEFUL AND SORT OF LIKE A CORPOREAL MANIFESTATION OF A LONG LOST DREAM AND AN IMPOSSIBLE HOPE FOR THE FUTURE... |
| bahaghari 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abuseYou create the juiciest lines in your poems, like this one: "an Eve-addicted apple". Interesting and makes a reader think. It's a distinction... I noticed. I think you were born to do this, to write. So write on. |
| st. maverick 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseYou're beautiful, and your poems are too. |
| myheartwantsyou 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abusebeautifully brutal if it's possible |
| faking closure 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abusegorgeous, i expect nothin less from you. wonderful :) -naomi |
| beatrice is hot 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseNice. |
| Shimmering Crane Bird 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is very innovative. Are you writing from Adam's point of view, or is Eve just a reference? Is this about temptation? Sorry about all the questions, I like deciphering poems and the meanings a lot, usually the poet is dead, so idk if I'm right. Haha. |