|Reviews for burn her name|
| Moonjava 3/24/06 . chapter 1
Wonderful poem. So many great lines in this.
| Aquafied 3/22/06 . chapter 1
ah tearing through flesh.
burning, burning. quite lovely indeed dear
(isnt it odd how we al become repetitions of one another, we use the same words. like another today word: ash, i just find it amusing)
| a lonely september 3/22/06 . chapter 1
you're incredible, you do know that right? you better. this is so gorgeous. i love all the verses. every word is perfect.
| flaming.footprints 3/22/06 . chapter 1
i love the mention of Achillies. It was just beautiful. No words could really describe it. Outstanding.
| by His blood 3/21/06 . chapter 1
if i could have half your talent, i would never stop smiling.
amazing. as always. what can i say? nothing you write can be anything but flawless.
| account not in use 3/21/06 . chapter 1
hm...it was brutal. and it hurts. in a beautiful way.
| eden is burning 3/20/06 . chapter 1
Oh, that was just amazing, everything was just perfect. -is deeply jealous-
| GypsyMothra 3/20/06 . chapter 1
"the snake grinning, kissing/the soul of your/Achilles heel you break/the skin with your/broken-tipped arrow grinning:"
Can I just say Wow. 'Cause that stanza was just brilliant. What a way to end.
| the naked civil servant 3/20/06 . chapter 1
oh jesus. poisonous outpouring of GORGEOUS imagery, i stand corrected. lovelovel.o.v.e. x
| dollface and her cancer 3/20/06 . chapter 1
It slides all the way through temptation and leaves you clinging by the fingertips. I love your work.
| KonekOniko 3/19/06 . chapter 1
i love your poetry... "an Eve-addicted apple"...what a brilliant line...heh, it's late here so i'll just leave you with this: amazing poem & please write more soon.
| in tesseraction 3/19/06 . chapter 1
i /love/ the phrase "eve-addicted apple"
and the rhythm of the last stanza
| SeaVoi 3/19/06 . chapter 1
I wish I could write like you, I love it. Your poems give me this mini-orgasim!
| twistedtruths 3/19/06 . chapter 1
so beautiful, i really enjoyed this poem. it was very well written. your so talented, keep writing.
| MidnightStar005 3/19/06 . chapter 1
Wow! I love your formatting! The poem was also well written! Great Job!