Reviews for parades and superman capes

Naibz 2006-03-21 ch 1,	this one is really good. nice flow. I also like it 'cause it kinda reminds me of Ed Edd abd Eddy. "and devising get rich quick schemes" after this line I couldnt stop picturing the cartoon Ed Edd and Eddy. good work. keep writing.
Lucid Nonsense 2006-03-20 ch 1,	Great job, I love it. I love the occasional rhyme and vivid description.
bright horizon splash 2006-03-19 ch 1,	what an extraordinary poem. i love the way it's told from a recess hero perspective. fantastic, way to go.
classic violet 2006-03-19 ch 1,	wow, very vivid. so extremely real in my mind.
Moondog Dozier 2006-03-19 ch 1,	Such wonderful movement and knowing innocence. The phrase work is well done, as this runs with the activity. Well thought out and developed. Creates a complex scene without overwording the feelings presented. Great work.
Midnight Star Lights 2006-03-19 ch 1,	Wow! This is great! ~xoxo~
breezy nostrils 2006-03-19 ch 1,	reminds me of my childhood memories where i'd swing around on the monkey bars. i like how it's so cute and innocent. nice work.