Disturbing because of how true this can be, but an interesting piece that kept me reading in fascination to see where you were going with it.

Some minor errors that you might want to fix, in the sentence "...faces loose the last of their baby fat...", should be lose, not loose. In "seven pairs of shoes with sequence,..." I believe you meant sequins. In the last paragraph, "thrust into the akward..." the word is spelled awkward.

This made me laugh. Hard. Great job draketeeth, great job.

Wow...reading this, I suddenly realize I suck as a woman. *tear* Yay stereotypes!

When i first started reading i had no idea it would go throw the entire process. good job... great essay.

Wow, that was amazing. It is sad to say that is how things are. SirScott

Well, this was sad. I'm not sure if your message gets as clearly across as I'm sure you meant it to. I'm glad this is saitre, because otherwise I'd beat you over the head with a book on damaging stereotypes.

XD How true, how true. How sad as well. Good job, I really like how you've written this! Power to those who fight the societal mold! ^^