|Reviews for Surviving Obsidian Empire|
| Tra-vation 12/30/09 . chapter 25
The truth is out! Yay! I wonder how the dinner is going to go.
| Revel in the Night 12/30/09 . chapter 25
Well I didn't expect Lorelei to announce her love like that...atleast she got it out there. Why are Ash and Jason so adamant on keeping their songs the way they are and ignoring Lorelei's advice? They're too immature. P How many more chapters are left? I'm so anxious to see everything become resolved and finally see Lorelei and Jason as a couple. P
- Revel in the Night
| pinkeclipse 12/29/09 . chapter 25
i hope she doesnt forgive jason soon since he did move on pretty quickly to another girl...thanks for the update!
| smurf-love 9/28/09 . chapter 24
this is really good, but like wi wish something would happen between lor and jason...cuz ya its ya...i cant find the words fro it...
| pinkeclipse 9/19/09 . chapter 24
thanks for the update!
| Oyuki 9/16/09 . chapter 24
lorelai still makes me mad, but so does jason. i don't know how he feels though. i'm pretty sure he feels like crap though.
| mia5081 9/16/09 . chapter 24
I have to admit, it's a little strange seeing such a different side of Karen at the end of this chapter-I didn't even she had it in her, lol.
I hope you'll update soon!
| Amused Bookworm 9/15/09 . chapter 24
YOUR BACK! Excitement! Good chapt I can not wait to read more.
| ShrimpoJewels 9/15/09 . chapter 24
Yay for update :)
So I hope they get it together and I hope Lorelei gets back into everyone's good graces...I do like her she was quite dumb in running away and breaking Jason's heart but hey she broke her own heart in the process so it's kind of a trade off right?
| Im Just Mlssundaztood 8/3/09 . chapter 23
I loved reading this. They both have their faults but they worked together. Jason must really love her. Rebound...awful thing to do to another person.
At least with Drew, he stopped it. So now it's too late. Sometimes you realize things when it is too late. Kinda sad with Drew, but he'll have to get over it.
It seems like Lorlei is trying to block the hurt. She has every right to keep Caroline out of there. And Jason is hurt but does he think being with Caroline is going to make it better?
Cause yeah, she left for two weeks but he dithces her for Caroline three days after she leaves. What a dick...
Yeah, had to get that out. She was ready to tell him that she loved him, right?
It's not just her that did the wrong...but maybe she should have tried harder. I know, pride, I've got a lot of it too. but prides gonna kill ya one of these days...
I wonder what is going to happen next?
Im Just M!ssundaztood
| Oyuki 6/18/09 . chapter 23
no, you don't do that to your child only to end up in the same situation later. that's totally effed up, dude. you take money in exchange for your child and then have three more? being young and broke is not an excuse at all. i mean, what kind of childhood did her daughter could have w/ no mother in the picture? she just makes me angry! more soon.
| pinkeclipse 6/17/09 . chapter 23
glad she talked to her mother!
| mia5081 6/17/09 . chapter 23
For some reason-and I'm not exactly sure why-I feel really bad about Drew. Not that I don't want Lorelei to end up with Jason, because I really do, but I want Drew to be happy as well. I don't know. I am in a bit of a pickle at the moment lol. Loved the chapter though )
| Curious2thelast 6/17/09 . chapter 23
I was just wondering who is Lennon? There are so many people that begin with L I tend to get confused lol
| Amused Bookworm 6/17/09 . chapter 23
This chapter was powerful. I can not wait to read more. I hope all of life is going good for you and I am looking forward to the confrontation.