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| InsaneNicEly 2006-03-22 ch 1,  | That last line got to me pretty well. Almost stabbed. The whole poem almost stabbed but in a metaphorical dawn of inspiration sort of way... If that makes sense. It was very good, really melancholy. Not used to this length, but very good, nonetheless. |
| mobman 2006-03-19 ch 1,  | wow... brilliant. Definitly hit your point here, i expect more from you... i'll keep an eye out. |