Wow, this is really moving. I love the symbolism of the feather.

Hey!

I like this one. Very inventive. Amazing.

Luv ya,
Tashi :)

you're good..how are you that good...

gawwsh...


soo zealous.

-_-;

good joob.

Oh wow my goodness. Hahaha I liked that one. I think that one really portrays human nature.

Well at least according to Hobbes, anyway. History... bleh. I don't even know why I mentioned that guy. Guess I just have that mountain of homework on my mind?

Beauitful, possibly my favorite poem from you. :) I loved the last two lines. Love it.

loved the metaphor of the beak and feathers...very bittersweet...i like it =))

Bravo, I loved it. It was simply wonderfull

haha, i like this one!

*applause* wow! this is amazing! its really well written and has nice flow. great job ^_^

Wow...powerful, consice...wonderfully worded...great job. =o *applause*

love it.

~kait

beautiful.

This poem is true, we can't always get what we want in life.

EB

This poem is short, but contains a powerful message. Excellent job, I love poems like this.

short and powerful... thank you for that