Reviews for when birds become roses

Reviews For: when birds become roses

teh tarik 2006-08-15 ch 1,	the mirror you hang on your bedroom wallshows us crumpled into each otherlike accidentally pressed flowers. ~the nature imagery was gorgeously overpowering ^_^i love this piece so much ^_^ from the broken up stanzas to the names of the flowers & the whole female touch to the poem =)
no.peace.los.angeles 2006-06-18 ch 1,	Wow! I love how you kept the bird and flower imagery throughout the entire poem. Nice continuity. I think my favorite line of this was "the mirror you hang on your bedroom wall/shows us crumpled into each other/like accidentally pressed flowers." I love the verb usage in that, and the image of accidentally pressed flowers. Great work. I'll be reading more of your stuff in the future. Keep writing! :)
bleed gilead 2006-04-18 ch 1,	love the images, love the way you go through the poem, violent-gentle, how the underlying metaphor begins to slowly reveal itself. augh. fantastic job.
water lily nymph 2006-04-08 ch 1,	tremendous finale, it made me grin. you're going to be famous one day, this poem is unbelievable along with the rest.
boys kiss girls 2006-04-08 ch 1,	Wow. this is insanely descriptive. this is great. great job.
a lonely september 2006-04-04 ch 1,	ohmygod. i cannot believe this. this is so incredible. i have never in my life read something to beautifully written as this. it's just so amazing! it shocks me completely, the way you describe everything, the way you see everything and word everything so perfectly. this is amazing. i'd give anything for talent like this. you are amazing.
Chemically Induced 2006-04-03 ch 1,	one of the most beautiful tragics ive read thus far on f-press. the avian metaphor throughout the poem is marvelous, as is the excellence in about 3932 of these lines. brimming with the breaker of hearts. i love that. the last part, the key was swallowed long before/so i slip out the window/and soar. perfect. so jealous, but writing is about the love, the art, and not the glory. so keep it up, almost. automatic. ;) love, c.induced.
the naked civil servant 2006-03-30 ch 1,	you left so often, but allowed me to stay in your garden. these golden stems sprouting from the earth mesh above, around and below me. such thin plants, but so difficult to bend. that is unbelievable, fragile & gorgeous. i am in love with this poem.
frayedlifeforce 2006-03-29 ch 1,	wow. this is so beautiful, i loved it so much. you are so amazingly good at writing. i'm adding it to my favourites. oh and the way you wrote the lines: 'you fooled me into thinkingi was a greenhouse flower, but' was just so wonderful.
Ajna 2006-03-26 ch 1,	Your words enthrall me. You have a talent beyond comprehension. This is going on my favorites.
Aquafied 2006-03-22 ch 1,	you left so often, but allowed me to stay in your garden.-cute, reminds me of small beautiful cottages. i really having a feeling for this, just cant find it i love the imagery of it all though, golden cages.it makes everything in such a soft, beautiful light
classic violet 2006-03-20 ch 1,	I. Love. This. God, this is so gorgeous & so beautiful & so stunning & so completely amazing and fantastic, it's just so good. God, I love it.
GypsyMothra 2006-03-20 ch 1,	Lovely read, I must say.
she's not breathing 2006-03-19 ch 1,	it read as painfully as heartbreak. i love it. favourite lines were your summary. absolutely amazing. ~kait
Hax Rook 2006-03-19 ch 1,	that golden cage. thoroughly decent read - metaphors of metaphors! (can i say tasteful?) worth it. almost bordered on the cheese here and there.. but not quite. i like it.

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