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| none of burt's beeswax 2007-04-23 ch 1, | aww, this is cute. yeah, i always wonder if my memory is too good. i kind of wish it was worse, so i wouldn't have to think about summer things like this... |
| Setsuna529 2006-06-27 ch 1, | Yeah... this is too familiar. Well done, it's something I can more empathize with. |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2006-04-09 ch 1, | I liked this. I never have had a summertime crush, but it sounds nice. I really enjoyed the last line, it reminds of a poem I wrote Questions of Love. I liked this even more because I can relate to it. I love it when that happens. Sincerely, the Stranger in the moonlight. |
| sleeping Pisces 2006-04-07 ch 1, | Love this poem, so bitter and truthful. Poems are almost always good when they are truthful. Peace, Daze |
| Nicole Michele 2006-04-07 ch 1, | I hate summer crushes, but I love this poem. It's very truthful and I know how much it hurts to be the only one holding on. |
| candyaddict 2006-03-24 ch 1, | O.O it's got a very twisted feel to it. a good read, though. |
| burning kisses 2006-03-23 ch 1, | i love this poem!! "MUSIC"- its a pun!!-kind of. this is so sad. nice work. maybe he will remember you and you can fall in love again! Good luck. |
| fairEtales 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Ha. Ha. I know who you are talking about. :) It's cute. |
| Thareth 2006-03-20 ch 1, | reminds me of how i've been thinking bout my ex. like it though |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-03-19 ch 1, | well expressed, the words really were powerful in portraying the feelings keep writing! |