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Reviews For: Music In Your Eyes

none of burt's beeswax
2007-04-23
ch 1,
aww, this is cute. yeah, i always wonder if my memory is too good. i kind of wish it was worse, so i wouldn't have to think about summer things like this...
Setsuna529
2006-06-27
ch 1,
Yeah... this is too familiar. Well done, it's something I can more empathize with.
the Stranger in the moonlig...
2006-04-09
ch 1,
I liked this. I never have had a summertime crush, but it sounds nice. I really enjoyed the last line, it reminds of a poem I wrote Questions of Love. I liked this even more because I can relate to it. I love it when that happens.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.
sleeping Pisces
2006-04-07
ch 1,
Love this poem, so bitter and truthful. Poems are almost always good when they are truthful.

Peace, Daze
Nicole Michele
2006-04-07
ch 1,
I hate summer crushes, but I love this poem. It's very truthful and I know how much it hurts to be the only one holding on.
candyaddict
2006-03-24
ch 1,
O.O it's got a very twisted feel to it. a good read, though.
burning kisses
2006-03-23
ch 1,
i love this poem!! "MUSIC"- its a pun!!-kind of. this is so sad. nice work. maybe he will remember you and you can fall in love again! Good luck.
fairEtales
2006-03-20
ch 1,
Ha. Ha. I know who you are talking about. :) It's cute.
Thareth
2006-03-20
ch 1,
reminds me of how i've been thinking bout my ex. like it though
mizu no kokoro
2006-03-19
ch 1,
well expressed, the words really were powerful in portraying the feelings

keep writing!
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