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| Safira 2006-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting use of alliteration - I have never seen so much E's in one piece! Loved the first two lines, "Experienced through exhaustion,And erased simply with easy." Autumn. |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI like this short and very cool |
| FunkyFlower17 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseinteresting style. i liked how u used the 'ex...' words and the way u ended so...bluntly. great job, keep writing, ~mez~ |
| TiEka Koniku 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abusewhy you change your name? ::is confused:: oh well. it is a unique format for the poem. definately not your typical thing. but it still pretty cool. well done Shaz! ::huggles:: *TI* |
| in theory 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseNice job, I wrote something awhile back using E words. Always interesting, sound and letter repetition. Keep up the good work. peace |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abusei love the alliteration, great job keep writing! |