This is one great story, it has it's downsides and such, the beginning wasn't the best part and it seemed a tad too angst-ridden to me, but the story picked up and now when it was really getting some speed, it stops. Such a shame, I hope you will update this story soon with new material. I can hardly wait to see how it'll all end!

wonder what's up with Pen? hope u update soon.

Go, Pen! wow, this is getting really good...

just reading along here...
very interesting story, and man, is Pen really strange! but's he cool, and weird, and stuff...yeah, i'll go keep reading...

Rough beginning...but the rest of the story just keeps getting better and better. I'm anxious to read more!

~Sands

I've read your whole story so far. it is really good. i look forward to your next chapter.

that was grest i love the fisrt chapter. I am most likely going to read them all in one week. Keep it up.