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| Aquafied 2006-03-22 ch 1,   | personalized, almost reminds me of kids sitting on corners and eating sticky popsicles, girls with high heels who boys whistle at and their parents aren't home yet. |
| Anaare 2006-03-21 ch 1, | I enjoyed reading this. Well done and thank you for the review! |
| dark stars grace 2006-03-20 ch 1, | 'starry silhouette,' what a lovely visual. splendid, keep writing. |
| ode to a firefly 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Hahaha, this reminds me of "I don't care if it's BURNING DOWN, I am going to kiss my boyfriend underneath the Eiffel Tower!" Ahem, sorry... Lovely poem m'dear. =) ~Christine~ |
| sunday night sky 2006-03-20 ch 1, | this is so gorgeous, the imagery is beautiful. great job :D |
| boys kiss girls 2006-03-19 ch 1, | That is so cool =) the saving a piece of the sky sounds familiar though... i dont know. anyway, its pretty :) |
| Probably Jason 2006-03-19 ch 1, | how do you lean against a starry silhouette? |
| classic violet 2006-03-19 ch 1, | whoa! i was blown away. this poem may be short, but it is simply beautiful & sweet. oh my, just gorgeous! keep writing! |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-19 ch 1, | Very unique. This has a real tenderness that is hard to capture. Well done. |