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| Smoky Bear 2006-04-18 ch 1,   | can you come and live by me and be my friend? lol... i'll bring the doobie snacks :D this is gorgeous, it's the essence of friendship without mushy sentiment. just tells it as it is and i like that in poetry. the arrangement sounds and word flow is almost lyrical. it's great stuff. as for the title... can see the indecision, comfort sums it up but pillow is more elusive and pillow is a definitive epitome of comfort... dunno i'm crap with titles :D |
| Neverlander12 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Man, I wish I had someone like you. You're hella cool for that. Anywho- fantastic poem. Beautiful. Smooches-CGUll_the_Wizpig |
| Konfusion 2006-03-19 ch 1, | It is beautiful. I really enjoyed the "inside jokes" (such as making fun of the late night TV). They made it very personal, but sweet. This poem made me smile, and for that.. I thank you. |