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| Eva Zafarano 2006-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseI would put some of the stanzas/lines together. I can understand dramatic hesitations. But you seem to be excessive. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseGood for you. I like this. I like the armor usage. Good job. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. Speechless. This is outstanding! Write on! ~Anna~ |