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Reviews For: Battle Scars

Eva Zafarano
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abuseI would put some of the stanzas/lines together. I can understand dramatic hesitations. But you seem to be excessive.
boys kiss girls
2006-03-19
ch 1,
abuseGood for you. I like this. I like the armor usage. Good job.
Princess-anna57
2006-03-19
ch 1,
abuseWow. Speechless. This is outstanding!

Write on!

~Anna~
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