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| LebaneSpirit112 2006-03-20 ch 1,   | I liked your descriptions, your style is distinctive and elite. It fits your plot perfectly. What grasps me most, perhaps, is that you don't have much reviews. WTF is up with that? Your story is good, is there not enough readers or something?? But yes, it was captivating. I don't know much about plot lines with murder and love and mistakes, but yours pretty much tied the three into one. Good job.-LebaneSpirit112 |