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| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-04-03 ch 1, | No, I don't think u are a hater...but I dunno if I like this or not...I'm not big on dissing sub-culters. Posers or not. But I did like the part about the pants. And yes...there are lots of posers...stupid f ing posers, I hate u. Keep writing! |
| Written 2006-03-29 ch 1, | nice work! I like the kids who actually buy those clothes because they like thrift shops and not because they like hot topic... etc. and "emo" has almost always actually been an insult to the subculture that is emo. for example, no bands usually admit to being emo and try to get away from the label. these days, more people find it as a rallying point as well as a sort of joke. I love the people who are seriously into their own thing and aren't middle class kids out to whine just cuz they can, and your poem is just perfect! |
| checkerboxed 2006-03-24 ch 1, | I snuck a look at the other reviews, and I have to say, theirs are a lot different then mine.I think it all depends on the person. A lot of "emos" I know are just as you described: fake. But I know others who really do have the hard life, and dress/act the way they do because its who they are. Then there's those who happen to listen to that sort of music because they like the sound, and who dress that way only because it looks good on them.But I really do like the way you portrayed the fake ones. The "posers". The sarcasm is REALLY easy to notice, and I love it.-O.Rhia |
| coal and marigolds 2006-03-24 ch 1, | Heh. I love the part about the pants. How the hell do they get /in/ those things... |
| doe-eyes 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Ha! That's funny! I like the part about the pants too. I don't know how some people can wear such tight pants... |
| Aquafied 2006-03-22 ch 1, | hah, isnt funny how we harrass others because of the way they choose to be? "emo" is a music genre, dead.maybe those scene kids are just a little bit posing, and more than a little bit a lot. but unless you know every single one, how would you really know their reasons? it reminds me of the emo song, but this almost even more insulting.we are all just silliness, but i would laugh, but you actually said in it, "without actually owning up to it" do you have a criteria sheet? hah, i was seriously laughing but then you almost seemed like you know the exact way these kids are supposed to be. you have me fooled(but i overreact about everything) |
| chaos called creation 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Haha love that ending. I don't have any emos in my school though =( |
| dark stars grace 2006-03-20 ch 1, | very amusing. I love the little sister's pants line--great poem. |
| The Watched 2006-03-20 ch 1, | *sniggers* Too right. |
| ode to a firefly 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Hahaha, very funny! The dark "X"s add a lot to the theme. Nice job! *thumbs up* ~Christine~ |
| Probably Jason 2006-03-20 ch 1, | hi, i wasn't negatively criticizing your last piece. i was just trying to understand the image you had described. not sure why you felt the need to attack my ** for that. |
| boys kiss girls 2006-03-19 ch 1, | Heh. thats kinda funny. |