Aw. It's SO sad. Omg. Ah. I love it though. It's really sweet. The end is great. That line, "And your heart's attention seems free" is just great. Definately on of my favoites. I also liked "Is rain herself out on your shoulder" because... It's just so sweet and bittersweet and sad. Aww. I absolutely love this whole piece.

I really like the undercurrent of themes that are in this - and the detail; how you kind of "became" the cloud. Nicely done, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.