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| Hemogoblin 2007-01-14 ch 3,   | I actually read the whole thing, but I'm going to review it all in one go because I'm a lazy basshole. (bastard + **)/2 = ? Okay, is Dev Russian? His parents remind me of Russian parents. I've got 'em too. I guess I might have gotten that he's Russian from Johann's attempt at a "Russian accent", but I don't know. I like the way this is written, in spurts of thought. It sounds slightly frantic. And emotional. And nice. Keep on truckin'. I like it. |