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blackrose87 2002-03-26 . chapter 1
gosh i don't know what to say just..... beautiful poetry
Kel-chan 2001-06-30 . chapter 1
I know just how you feel...
EvilRasputina 2001-04-24 . chapter 1
This is so good!!!Way better than anything I can do!!
Zeech 2001-03-05 . chapter 1
Ahh! Chao-chan's depressed?! ::jumps on Chao-chan and huggles her (by now, I think you know Im straight) :: Nice poem, but dont be depressed!!!! Hey, drop me a line sometime. Im not exactly happy go lucky myself ^_^.
Autumn12 2001-02-22 . chapter 1
This poem is so beautiful.
The Confuser 2001-02-22 . chapter 1
Days days days, all days of endless time. We have our days, you have yours, fallen all our we. I am the Confuser, the Confuser, the Confuser, perhaps you can see but perhaps not. Fallen once and fallen twice, shall never rise again. One of those days, we all have our days, fallen by the way of hell. Fallen, yes, we all have our days. I am the Confuser, can you see?
AngelFly 2001-02-22 . chapter 1
wow. that's all I can say. I'm crying... wow...
nickyO 2001-02-22 . chapter 1
that was depressing...I especially like the mirror imagery reflecting back the frightening recognition...nice.
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