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| 1001lie 2006-07-08 ch 1, | hey this poem is great! u have a knack for writing dearest :) |
| The FiboNACHI Sequence 2006-05-02 ch 1, | I love the beat and melody... can i use it in a song? PWEASE? *puppy dog eyes* ... i'll give you a cookie... nach |
| SliversofSilverPain 2006-03-21 ch 1, | *applauds* you're right; this one is different. It's like a story, but with a lovely flow... and of course my beloved Rhyme. Wonderful (as always) |
| Stodaklop 2006-03-20 ch 1, | I think this is a really good poem.Also in the end "hide before he finds you..." alows the reader I think to make the real ending.Keep writing.Stodaklop. |