|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| cornered.sensations 2006-03-20 ch 1, | the metaphor is so easily woven into the poem, I adore this, good job |
| zariccc 2006-03-20 ch 1, | Grim imagery. Kinda reminds me of Pink Floyd's 'The Wall' music video. "Nevermind the childish blue:" Ownage! |