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Reviews For: Washing Machine Discovery

forsakensmile
2006-03-22
ch 1,
I love how you used the idea of a washing machine to convey the theme. It added humour, which is great.
Politically Incorrect Lamb
2006-03-20
ch 1,
So when are we going to see the discovery channel tv show titled "the exploration of the washing machine caverns: the explanation of the missing college students". You did what you set out to do and you did it well. I'm jealous of your writing skills, you always have good word choice. My vocabulary envies yours, apparently.
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s
2006-03-20
ch 1,
ohoho! This was so funny! I have never read something about a washer. But I deffinatly know what this is talking about. My washers at the appartment are really ghetto..so this sounds like them! Keep writing!
Smoky Bear
2006-03-20
ch 1,
LOL! that's too fooking funny dude... can just picture feet kicking from a giant drum...

look, i know this is some kind of excuse not to have to wash your clothes... you hang on to those memories of humanity and keep ya ketchup stains!
Chemically Induced
2006-03-20
ch 1,
very nice. i've never thought of a washing machine as some sort of memory collector. the title made me think the poem was some kind of joke, but it's deep as hell. :)

love, c.induced.
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